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Elena1030 -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/9/2007 6:44:38 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: cries-within I did say that I'm done with exams and all that... cuz I am. LOL sighs..... Maybe if I give you another month maybe you'll post. LOL then again .... hopes you prove her suspicions wrong And you would be who? [8D] So glad for you that exams are over! Wheeeeee!!!!!! If you ever want extra help with grammar and mechanics, I can help you. Those skills are the bulk of what I use in my job.

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/9/2007 10:02:50 PM)
Ty...... I'm glad exams are over 2. I was hoping someone else would post. I was getting a little lonely here. ty for the offer about grammar and mechanics.

Elena1030 -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/9/2007 10:11:58 PM)
You're welcome! I like the line about your thoughts keeping you company. Are they good company? Or do they prop their feet on the coffee table and leave water rings from their beverages on the wood surface? Do they help clean up after snacks? Or do they leave napkins and peels lying around? [;)] Sometimes my thoughts are very unruly. Like spoiled children. Ya know---really pouty. Other times my thoughts are like loveable grannies---very comforting and nurturing. What about yours? [sm=icon_smile.gif]

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/11/2007 10:48:44 PM)
Some times my thoughts are anxious in nature they won't, they pace about walking back in forth between one thing or another. The what ifs are the many friends that bring with them. They're uninvited and rude and don't stop comming. These are thoughts that I wish I could throw out, but once they are there its hard to get rid of them. Like a rude enemy that only wants to ruin your life with worry, fear, and never let you find any peace at all. They're always worrying about the future and how I don't have this or that and what if this happens. Some of my thoughts are negative... they put down anything that I try to do. Its not good enough, these thoughts are like, emo teenagers trying to get me depressed, keeping me down in the mouth and refuse to let me feel even the slightest bit ok with how I am. They wear all black like gothic people and they hate any sort of positive or happy thing. They refuse to be happy in any way. They love to make me depressed, to feel like I can do nothing at all. These thoughts at times remind me that I"m not perfect other times they are like a rude relative that's pushed limits of being there. Its too much, you want to throw them out because they become a burdensome enemy. some of my thoughts are wishful daydreamers.... they love to enjoy nature and the day. They want to relax and have fun. They're creative, and always thinking of doing something fun or artistic. Writting something, drawing, or making something. Always off in some other world, whether the past, present or the future. Though at times they refuse to live in the now, they think how things could've been or how they might be. Mostly I enjoy these thoughts and are good friends to me. Though at times they keep me from dealing with the now, and what needs to be done, becasue they're so lazy. Some of my thoughts are joyus...seem to be silly and goofy as clowns. They enjoy things... and are content with the way things are for the most part. These thoughts are like my best friend, I enjoy having them around. When they're here I'm usually having a good time in life. Things are great in life.

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/17/2007 9:20:50 PM)
once again... no one answers... Lol well @ least I'll be working soon.

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/21/2007 5:41:33 PM)
Now I am.... sighs will I ever learn... how to do that which you ask you tell me again i wonder if I'll remember will I ever learn... how to really do this job or will it be too hard for me will I mess up.. then that'll be the end i know to try the best I can if that's all I can do nothing comes out right then I can't say I didn't try

adopted.son -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/21/2007 11:26:18 PM)
my God is by r. eric croft 3/31/04 IM3 music, unltd. intro: [A][B/A][A2(fr5)][B/A][A][B/A][A2(fr5)][B/A(fr7)] : (F#Maj7)holy and (EMaj7)mighty (F#Maj7)patient and (B fr7)true(A2fr5) (F#Maj7)merciful and (EMaj7)righteous (F#Maj7)faithful and (B fr7)just(A2fr 5) and i (C#m)praise You and i (B)worship You and i (C#m)need You and i (B)love You yes i (C#m)praise You and i (B)worship You and i (C#m)need You O, (B)Lord...You’re... (A)bigger than the (B/A)ocean’s tide (A2,5fr)higher than the (B/A)mountains (A)stronger than a (B/A)hurricane (A2,5fr)deeper than the (B/A,7fr)sea (A)brilliant as the (B/A)stars above (A2,5fr)brighter than the (B/A)sun (A)peaceful as a (B/A)moonbeam the (A2,5fr)wonder of Your (B/A,7fr)love i wish you could hear it the way i do! just tithe if it sells...[;)]

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/22/2007 8:22:57 PM)
Looks awesome.... [;)] [:D]

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/24/2007 7:31:27 PM)
Cries for help.... When I scream my silent plea for help Do you hear me? Do you see the pleas behind my eyes... begging you.... to not look the other way When I scream my silent plea for help Is it over and done.... this trap and old ways sucking me in again Is it over and done... or will I be trapped back in the endless cycle always hating myself wanting to be more but never measuring up... in the end... why do I hide... why am I afraid to speak... when all I want to do is find a friend in you when I scream my silent plea for help Do you hear me? Do you see the pleas behind my eyes begging you .... don't look the other way When I scream my silent plea for help come and save me save me from myself.... be my savior... my savior come and save me ... from myself when I scream my silent plea for help hear me.... hear me... see the pleas behind my eyes begging you.... not to look the other way when I scream my silent plea for help

adopted.son -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/24/2007 11:41:08 PM)
grace amazing by r. eric croft (c) 2003 IM3 music, unltd. watching, praying i don't entertain temptation my spirit's willing but alone i'm not that strong Father, i'm begging; take my troubles far away from me although Your will be done broken bread and poured-out wine when i lean on You, i'm fine i'm a branch and You're the Vine and i'm layin' here listenin' to the heartbeat of God thorn in my side; irritating, selfish, foolish pride when i'm humble You lift me up grace amazing! in my weakness is Your perfect power when i'm weak You make me strong broken bread and poured-out wine when i lean on You, i'm fine i'm a branch and You're the Vine and i'm layin' here listenin' to the heartbeat of God i'm a sign! i'm a wonder! and i'm walking in the miracle of You! (modulate up a step from G to A) repeat chorus: broken bread and poured-out wine when i lean on You, i'm fine i'm a branch and You're the Vine and i'm layin' here listenin' to the heartbeat stayin' here listenin to the heartbeat prayin' here listenin to the heartbeat of God! cantcha just see john leaning on Jesus at the last passover supper? i have to remind myself daily that when i'm weak He makes me strong and when i lean on Him i can hear His heart beating, keeping me in perfect rhythm with Him. again, if it sells, tithe! pm for chords

adopted.son -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/24/2007 11:48:26 PM)
quote: ORIGINAL: cries-within Is it over and done.... this trap and old ways sucking me in again Is it over and done... or will I be trapped back in the endless cycle come and save me save me from myself.... be my savior... my savior come and save me ... from myself dang!! you okay? i've been on that cycle before. i'm here for ya. +eric

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/25/2007 6:13:49 PM)
long... story.... ;) yea its no fun....

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (5/28/2007 4:36:11 PM)
what am I doing wrong ? have i done anything right? am I too slow? am I not learning fast enough? second guessing myself as fear paranoia takes hold of me again I've only just started am I wrong to question I don't want to loose this I need this job.... I like it here... hate to think that I could loose it maybe I'm a fool to question maybe I'm a fool to fear but if you give me one more chance I can show you that I can do better worries about my job... this is my second week... and well I only have 3 days so far? little worried I guess.... I'm hoping that'll change... I guess... I'm worried that I'm not doing well enough for them. I think I'm doing ok... I'm learning... I can do the cones now. I know my flurries... just about backwards and forwards. I know about just everything except for the food... but that's cuz you never taught me at least not yet really. Sorry needed to vent. I just I like it there and I don't want to mess things up.

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/2/2007 10:12:27 PM)
Sighs.... I think this thread is dead for the most part. alone with my thoughts the deafing silence that is so heavy it suffocates me breaking it would be release yet at the same moment it seems that to do so would almost be wrong but right in the same instant if I were to speak... who is listening who is really listening to me ... so selfish am I so self seeking me and I .... me and I what I want... what I need it is nothing this me invisible... unseen.... as it should be... simply unanswered

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/4/2007 4:42:53 PM)
k... i've almost given up on this... not the writting just here...in this forum. (I think it died... )

duhfirst -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/4/2007 9:13:22 PM)
Hi.. just wanted to post and let you know that I have been reading your poems and thoughts. You have some very interesting poems and it has been great reading your work. Keep it up..

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/4/2007 11:10:34 PM)
:) just gets little rough when u feel maybe no one's reading it. nice to know that you are.

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/16/2007 10:42:59 PM)
invisible cloak the heavy blanket unable myself to remove it I can't do it alone people look past me unimportant.... unoticed walk by walk away i don't matter why should they care so the loneliness devours me swallowing me whole i am lost to it i can't escape it invisible me no one sees if I disapeared no one would notice at least not here

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/16/2007 10:46:06 PM)
Just thought I'd write one more thing here....scratches head... not sure why LOL maybe cuz I'm desperate for someone elses attention. That I can actually share my thoughts and feelings here without fear of someones reaction really. Still probably just a selfish foolish attempt to want and get some sort of attention, like maybe writting here will ease some of the pain that haunts me in my loneliness.

Nocturnalux -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/18/2007 12:31:13 AM)
I advise you to watch Neon Genesis Evangelion if you haven't done so already. You will see why I recommend this if you give it a go.

Bgazaway -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/20/2007 11:25:04 PM)
Ok. I just found this thread. In answer to the question from a long time ago about copywrites for the US ... ( don't know if you got your answer or not) The cost is around $30 per poem,song and so on. You can send them in at poetry.com and they will publish them, copywrite them in your own name. They will try to get you to buy the book that your work is published in but it is a little pricey. Tell me what ya'll think of this one. My King You are my King, noble and true I am but a servant, kneeling before you I tremble in awe of your majesty and grace Then I see the love shining in your face I stand before you, as you look at me Seeing something only you can see You see my heart and all that's there As I stand before you, my soul is bared As you look at me you say, in gentle tones "you are my child, my chosen one Live for me as I died for you With righteousness, faith, and love that's true I gave my life to set you free Now, through your life, let others see me For i now live in you night and day And I walk with you each step of the way I am the Christ, your chosen Lord Now, live for me, not the world!

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/21/2007 6:39:49 PM)
Its a good poem the only thing I see which is a tiny error, close the quote after world. thanks... yea I tried that once.... my folks just thought the poem.com was just a scam. So they wouldn't let me do anything with it. Idk if its a scam or not, but my folks won't let me do any of it. Still $30 per poem seems pricy enough.

duhfirst -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/29/2007 2:42:38 AM)
Still reading your posts :) Rose Buds Life's rose blooms so brief We hardly remember each solemn petal Red as cherries its' soaking hue From sprouting seed till perfection is due. Lifted to soar a gift from God For grace and beauty shines angels crowns And all is done on heaven through earth To keep natures balance and preserve loves worth. All presents don't last that scarlet drops fill Mercy shown divine ends flowering kneel God's patiently awaiting green stems to crack dry To transition ruby glow to another blooming eye.

cries-within -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (6/29/2007 6:15:51 PM)
To be Free (Prayer/poem) Oh Lord how do I say the words to break me free from my captivity part of me only tries to run while all that time I sink deeper Will I ever break free from it will I ever have the strength to the words or will they be said for me will it be found out either way either way Oh lord clense me of this take it from my mind heal me Jesus let me be set free help me lord when temptation comes again help me lord to truly break free from its grip help me lord if there is no other way except to say the words if there is no other way for freedom from this to come oh Lord Jesus please help me may these words not fall short may these words be heard in your ears may you set me free so I am completely yours this won't be a barrier between me and you this won't be a barrier from being used by you let me just be free from this

duhfirst -> RE: Poetry/lyric corner... and other stuff-You can post too. (7/1/2007 6:32:02 PM)
The Drummer There is a drummer that lives on my roof I hear him everyday Same time mostly and often he plays the same song His monotonous rhythm soothes me to sleep When he gets going camera flashes and applause Scares the kids out of their seats I wonder how the world can hold him I guess that's why he plays only for me His strokes are fast and furious but slows to a crawl when he reaches his end.

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