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WilliamCoburn -> My Book Description (5/8/2008 11:34:51 AM)

A father who says “Jesus is the only way to Salvation”
A mother who says “The Watchtower Society is the only way to Salvation”
And a scared little boy…

THE SPANKING ROOM: A Child’s Eye View of the Jehovah’s Witnesses



What do you think? All comments and criticisms are welcome.



hvt -> RE: My Book Description (5/8/2008 4:05:20 PM)

William,
Very interesting to say the least. I hope you will give a more indepth preview. God bless you



Kathrynpagecamp -> RE: My Book Description (5/9/2008 9:40:55 AM)

William,

Is the book fiction or non-fiction? The first three lines work well for fiction, but novels don't generally have subtitles. If it is a novel, you might want to cut the subtitle, which dilutes the punch of the main title. If it is non-fiction, you should make that clear in the description at the top. Just my opinion for whatever it's worth.

The first three lines definitely capture my attention. If it is a novel, go for it.



WilliamCoburn -> RE: My Book Description (5/9/2008 9:59:43 AM)

I will start a new thread with the full first chapter.



WilliamCoburn -> RE: My Book Description (5/9/2008 10:01:18 AM)

it is Non-fiction - Memoir



knot2witty -> RE: My Book Description (5/12/2008 11:39:24 PM)

It sounds like a book I'd like to read.



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